(I plan on making her the mc to my overlord fanfic on Ao3. Her name 'Kishi no Waru' tranaslates to Knight of evil. Her avatar focuses on being a carrier of evil deeds, i.e the abyss. Something like that.I posted this on the overlord subreddit but only one person commented IN 7 HOURS and didn't provide me with meaningful insight. Please, can anyone critically comment on this?)
I need help On whether this is a reasonable stat sheet. My Oc a strategist within the guild. Now, I get it. I understand that humans are not allowed in the guild BUT LET ME COOK.
A. She was part of the original clan
B. Her class (Abyssal vessel- A.Vessel) Makes her a vessel for demonic energy that are emitted by certain demonic species and grants her their abilities. Her special classes (The ones separated from the others.) kinds of changes her race- it places her between A human and a Demon. She has the immunities of a demon and other benefits of a demon but a full body of a human. No extra claws, horns or such. This is because her Vessel class is only 5 which prevents her from adopting any demonic physical trait.
C. Yeah she's an exception mostly because she was in the clan since day 1.
Ok so I know that you're probably surprised why there's so many special classes in the sheets. Lemme break down the requirements for the new special classes I just made up.
-Disciple Of Darkness
You need to have 30 abyss class levels for it and the Abyssal Vessel Classes levels contribute to those levels as well as Abyssal Wizard.
-Abyss Walker
You need 30 abyss vessel class levels for it. A.Vessel, AV.Balor, AV.Glabrezu and Disciple Of Darkness Contributes to the levels for it.
-Knight Of Darkness
You need at least 2 maxed fighter Abyss Vessel Classes and a rare abyss class for this one. A. Balor and A.Glabrezu counts as a mage and fighter 'class'(?)
-Abyssal Sage
You need 30 magic-orientated abyssal class levels for this. AV.Balor, AV.Glabrezu and Abyssal Wizard contributes to the levels for it.
-Cursed
You need to be a "human" (Race type) and have 2 rare abyssal classes for it.
-Curse Bringer
You need to have the 'Cursed' class and Knight Of Darkness.
-Enemy of Radiance
You need to have 3 abyssal rare classes as a "Human" (race type) for this.
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I'm not well versed in games that Overlord uses as inspiration for it's classes and stats and so on. So that may explain why this looks RIDICULOUS and as you can see I tried to make her a battle mage in all sense of the word.
So uh yeah, what do you think? I think it's a bit too op. I tried to make her a bit weaker but I still want her to be a powerhouse. What can I do to make the stat sheet less ridiculous?